Marooned on a desert island story starter
Your family goal is to create excitement and mystery.
Get your thinking caps on!
Sunday, June 8, 2014
The Room 7 Family Challenge
Room 7 challenges their families to write a story starter to help us with our marooned stories. It can be as long or as short as you wish. They are generally around 4 to 5 exciting sentences. Write the story starter as a comment. Be sure to ask us if you want more information.
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The wind was howling, whistling between the gaps. We huddled together in the small room. The unmade bed was cosy with the blankets scrunched around us. All of us on the same bed. Quiet. Waiting with anticipation.
Then an immense shudder happened. The floor was on a sharp angle and we could hear the wood splintering and cracking as we were lifted and flung. Clinging together as the the wind lifted our entire cabin, flinging us through the sky light a meteor.
haley story starter
there was a big gust of wind as a
horrendous storm coaming closer
I had a felling that the kayak was
coing to tip over I skremed
I had been counting down for months. Finally we were out on the boat with our lines out waiting for a bite. Suddenly there was pulling and tugging on my line, a splash and a thud. The boat lurched. Something rocketed out of the water and landed on the deck. Water poured on board...
May Day, May Day, May Day!! I heard the captain of the ship yelling into the radio. The water was rushing into the big hole that had appeared in the side of the boat when it collided with an unseen rock. We rushed to the lifeboats and quickly put our lifejackets on. By The Carter Family
The weather cange very quickly the boat started to wobble bam it spit in half i watch it sink to the bottom of the sea
The cold salty water smashed the little boat and I was tossed about like a leaf in the wind, suddenly a huge wave crashed over the boat and I felt myself being pulled under the water. I thrashed around desperately but I was sinking fast going down down down, water filling my nose, when would this end...... I slowly opened my eyes and was blinded by sunlight, I could feel warm sand under me. I looked around and realised I'd been saved, washed up on a small island, my relief was short lived. In the distance I could hear drums beating and see smoke rising, was I safe? The Woodbridge Family
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